tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.comments2023-03-21T11:40:11.209+00:00womaninwordsEdith Faalonghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15464587019968273107noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-29383241703860477652012-11-04T12:54:43.290+00:002012-11-04T12:54:43.290+00:00You actually got it very right. LoL. Thanks for re...You actually got it very right. LoL. Thanks for reading.Edith Faalonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15464587019968273107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-80101182024311699232012-11-04T11:48:09.468+00:002012-11-04T11:48:09.468+00:00should I heed or dare I ignore the threatening clo...should I heed or dare I ignore the threatening clouds?<br />what force has a man over outcomes yet to come?<br /><br />This is a well crafted piece. I compare it to speaking simply like saying a thing like "you are warned!" and I see how just these three words could lead to a brutally striking poem like this.<br /><br />striking...brutally striking...<br /><br />novisihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06144548155567055364noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-34109590948770159062011-12-08T21:18:46.749+00:002011-12-08T21:18:46.749+00:00I love it too! Thank you Nima..I love it too! Thank you Nima..Edith Faalonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15464587019968273107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-89604652562098338252011-12-08T20:41:19.313+00:002011-12-08T20:41:19.313+00:00I love it.I love it.Nimaali Muniruhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17636454349287867094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-49501950867258480632011-05-03T16:38:42.012+00:002011-05-03T16:38:42.012+00:00Who are you addressing in the above post? A specif...Who are you addressing in the above post? A specific individual or humanity in general?<br /><br />John O. (London)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-17293137451043142492011-02-17T14:46:25.754+00:002011-02-17T14:46:25.754+00:00:-*:-*:-*:-*:-*:-*Anyanhttp://www.goldinwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-57832156280358921912011-02-17T14:43:28.397+00:002011-02-17T14:43:28.397+00:00sure hun! i am glad you like it. because it does t...sure hun! i am glad you like it. because it does tug at my best self too. :)Edith Faalonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15464587019968273107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-7010088203719516182011-02-17T14:36:46.114+00:002011-02-17T14:36:46.114+00:00i really, really, reallllyyy love this poem sooo m...i really, really, reallllyyy love this poem sooo much. I cant read it enough times! whoever drove you to this height of creativity,(no matter what he is to you now) deserves your gratitude for the asset he turned out to be after all ;-)Anyanhttp://www.goldinwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-39258468634040876252010-11-06T18:54:43.697+00:002010-11-06T18:54:43.697+00:00Wow!!!Wow!!!Edemnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-16343837883591285372010-10-09T11:22:51.883+00:002010-10-09T11:22:51.883+00:00Edith you know what? i think you're doing a gr...Edith you know what? i think you're doing a great job. i have not read all your poems but I'm already loving "without Roots" and this one. Your mum did you good. I can see success starring at you nowBillings Tanaanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-5434777588297858982010-08-31T22:32:10.967+00:002010-08-31T22:32:10.967+00:00Best poem ever. I read this once on One Ghana One ...Best poem ever. I read this once on One Ghana One Voice and by the way... this is kobs.Nimaali Muniruhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17636454349287867094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-17211110532123937772010-06-02T13:53:03.133+00:002010-06-02T13:53:03.133+00:00Edith, collect these poems and publish.
John O.(L...Edith, collect these poems and publish.<br /><br />John O.(London)John O.noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-68598234702942262552010-05-20T21:20:23.385+00:002010-05-20T21:20:23.385+00:00am glad u like it...just curious. is this kobs?am glad u like it...just curious. is this kobs?Edith Faalonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15464587019968273107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-59620948273564325792010-05-20T08:05:21.411+00:002010-05-20T08:05:21.411+00:00This was the first poem of yours I ever read (I th...This was the first poem of yours I ever read (I think on One Ghana One Voice) & the first of many that impressed me. Very emotive (from the anticipation of the start to the feeling of loss at the end).<br /><br />Beautiful.Qué?https://www.blogger.com/profile/06920013121588367314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-76365159662014329722010-05-09T22:45:12.625+00:002010-05-09T22:45:12.625+00:00beautiful...I can wait for you to put together a f...beautiful...I can wait for you to put together a full book. Keep it up dear..you will surely go places..!Abel Chele Lopeznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-56098314370050428052010-05-04T15:38:31.570+00:002010-05-04T15:38:31.570+00:00u know ben...am sure u know all am not saying. Lol...u know ben...am sure u know all am not saying. Lol<br />what have u been up to?<br />I dont have ur number again o. So pls callEdith Faalonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15464587019968273107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-50857513357858377072010-05-04T15:20:00.341+00:002010-05-04T15:20:00.341+00:00this' beautiful Edith, it encapsulates tons an...this' beautiful Edith, it encapsulates tons and tons of emotions in 7 lines, and that's awesome!!ben anyanhttp://www.goldinwords.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-55973339116367525972010-05-03T14:01:53.253+00:002010-05-03T14:01:53.253+00:00:) . U should post out here sometime:) . U should post out here sometimeEdith Faalonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15464587019968273107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-48484644248999187322010-05-03T13:39:42.017+00:002010-05-03T13:39:42.017+00:00Just beautiful. I love the ending. Miss Faalong, I...Just beautiful. I love the ending. Miss Faalong, I salute! This piece is one of a kind.IanJazzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08636821497587423993noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-36662487334900975152010-05-03T00:31:25.081+00:002010-05-03T00:31:25.081+00:00@ johhny, find ur inner self. Connect.
Find a mome...@ johhny, find ur inner self. Connect.<br />Find a moment of solitude and ask your self all the right questions. U will find answers. Get to know your spirit on a personal level.Edith Faalonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15464587019968273107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-45283858834926719712010-05-03T00:25:37.824+00:002010-05-03T00:25:37.824+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.Edith Faalonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15464587019968273107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-68004868209598388842010-05-02T23:31:24.094+00:002010-05-02T23:31:24.094+00:00Edith, edith, edith.
I keep gapping everytime i re...Edith, edith, edith.<br />I keep gapping everytime i read something new from you. <br />I remember most of your previous works: for alms sake was explosive<br />You are pure genius.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3581260098234086445.post-63182172087448576242010-05-02T23:18:11.130+00:002010-05-02T23:18:11.130+00:00Very deep. How do you find it though?Very deep. How do you find it though?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07705680182844325365noreply@blogger.com